Tuesday, January 22, 2013

The Hitchhiker by Ricker Pond



 Below is a short story I wrote during a break from the novel.  Obviously, I'm feeling a bit nostalgic about driving through rural Vermont at night.  Enjoy!

           It was Christmas season, so Scott Bieber was singing his favorite song, “Grandma Got Run Over By A Reindeer” with the radio.  Pressing the gas pedal of his black pickup truck, he grinned at the furious roaring of his engine.  Then he jerked his wheel and left black marks on the road as he turned onto Vermont Route 232, the road that would lead him to his buddy Jay’s house.
            Scott, a thirty-one year old bachelor, ignored the white hats the sky had deposited on the evergreen trees several hours earlier.  He had two vital missions tonight: to prove to Jay that his truck could make it over a thicker pile of snow than Jay’s “Deer Killer” truck, and to out-drink his buddy. 
            Scott had a day old beard and a Patriots hat covering his messy brown hair that curled out from under like lifeless fingers.  On this starless night, it was difficult to tell the wrinkle lines on Scott’s face from several scars that lined his cheeks.  In the past decade, Scott had experienced no less than fourteen accidents involving power tools, motorized vehicles, and fire.
            Two minutes up Route 232, Scott spotted a man in a black jacket and red scarf and face mask waving frantically.  Scott glanced at his truck’s thermometer: it was a skin tingling -23 degrees outside.  Driving past the pedestrian without slowing, he waved slightly.  “I’ve got places to go, beer to drink!” he sang out.
            Route 232 ran parallel to a narrow river that fed into the large Ricker Pond further up.  Accelerating to sixty-five miles per hour, Scott felt his stomach tilt as the truck shot up a little hill and rose to two wheels for a second.  Shooting down the hill, he gave a sudden yell.
            A young woman stood directly in the middle of the road, twenty feet ahead!
            Scott turned hard to the left, and seeing no room there, swerved hard to the right, towards the river.  The vehicle began skidding, and Scott yanked the wheel violently towards the woman.  Better to kill a clueless pedestrian than end up under the dark blue icy river.
            The truck’s tires squealed as it turned a hundred and eighty degrees and finally stopped.  Scott, breathing hard, peered through the frosty windshield.  The woman had disappeared.  She had to be under the truck. 
            “No way am I getting incarcerated for this moron,” Scott muttered.  Switching his truck into first gear, he was beginning to edge down the road when a hand blocked the windshield.
            “Whoa!”  Scott rolled down his window and blew smoky breaths into the night.  “Did I hit you?”
            The woman smiled, looking completely serene.  “No, don’t worry.”
            “Good.  Well, I’m on my way somewhere, so I…”
            “Can I get a ride with you down 232?  Just a few miles,” the woman said.
            “I don’t…”  Scott studied the woman’s face.  Her heavy clothes could hide anything.  The woman’s heavy eyelids and dark lashes were inviting.  Scott gazed into her eyes, which were round blue appealing circles.  “Okay.  Hop in quick.”
            Scott reached over and unlocked the passenger door.  The woman tried the door.  “Do you mind?  My fingers are numb.”
            Scott quickly opened the door, letting the woman take a seat before he closed it.  Then he rolled up his window and continued, slightly more cautiously, down the road.
            “You’re the second person I’ve seen out on this road tonight,” he said.  “It’s usually so empty.  Well, earlier in the night.  I’ve actually never driven it at this hour.”  He gestured at the clock, which read 2:22a.m. 
            The woman nodded.  “Your truck feels lovely.  It’s nice and warm in here.”
            “You can take off your hat and jacket, if you want.”  Scott watched carefully as the woman removed her scarf and hat, revealing a green moose sweater that clung to her chest.  Shaking her head, she tossed several tiny dots of snow all over the front seat.  Her hair was a shadowy black, and her skin was chalky.
            “Are you going home?” Scott asked.  He glanced at the empty road for a moment, and then back at the youthful face of his passenger.
            “Yes.”  The woman paused.  “I’m so glad you picked me up.  I don’t want to be on the road at this hour.”
            “It’s so dark, in the snow, and this freezing temperature.  You’re lucky you’re okay.  Where’d you come from?” Scott demanded.
            “In just a few minutes, when it’s 2:32, you don’t want to be on this road alone.”
            “Sorry?”  Scott studied the woman’s smooth cheeks.  “What do you mean, you don’t want to be alone?”
            “That’s when the Ghost of Ricker Pond roams,” the woman said seriously.
            Scott chuckled.  “At this time of night in rural Vermont, ghost stories have a real good effect.  Go on, it’ll keep me alert!”
            The woman stared hard at Scott.  “All legends have a degree of truth to them.  Listen carefully.  This will affect you.  You have to follow certain steps to protect yourself against this ghost.”
            “And what are those?”  Scott turned off the truck’s radio.
            “The ghost was a man who was killed in a hit and run accident, twenty-nine years ago.  Before the collision, four vehicles passed by him without stopping, leaving him disoriented and hypothermic.  He died on the black ice in isolation.  In retribution, the spirit of the man seeks out four drivers a year, killing each of them in violent ways that sound like accidents.”
            “That’s a nice story.  Revenge of the ghost, huh?”
            “Revenge is a great deed.  There is no feeling like a satisfied vengeance,” the woman said coolly.
            Scott laughed.  “In that case, I guess I’m in trouble!  I saw a hitchhiker dude a little while ago.  Didn’t pick him up.  Too cold to make unexpected stops!”
            The woman nodded.  “That was a poor idea.”
            “So this ghost… what does it look like?” Scott asked, snickering.  Glancing at the woman, he did a double take.  Her previously flawless facial skin looked like a strawberry, red with tiny black spots.  Her hair, which had looked so smooth and shiny, looked more like a horse’s mane.
            “It looks like the man who was killed,” the woman said.
            “And… the ghost… what does it do?” Scott asked, hardly listening.  Had the woman’s nose protruded in such a jagged shape before?
            “The ghost does nothing.  If you see the ghost, you die at 2:32,” the woman said, shrugging.  Scott glanced at his truck’s clock.  It was 2:29.
            “Well, thanks for the warning.  Are we coming up on your house?”
            The woman nodded.  “Oh, yes.  You can let me off soon.  We should be there in about three minutes.”
            Scott tried to watch the road, but he felt an irresistible urge to watch the woman.  All her pure feminine qualities had melted from her face like hot wax.  He realized, suddenly, that she looked like a man with a five o’ clock shadow.  Her hair, which had been tucked into her sweater, no longer looked like it could reach her back.  It looked short and manly.
            “You know what?  Maybe I better let you off.  I have to make a call.”
            “We’re really close.  Just a couple more turns,” the woman said, her voice getting huskier.  Scott gripped the steering wheel like a baby grasping a finger.  The heat in the truck seemed to be going cold.
            “One dead person, yes.  One for each driver who didn’t stop,” the woman said without expression.
            Scott turned a slight corner.  “You can stop telling that story, now.”
            The clock read 2:31. 
            The woman suddenly jolted in her seat.  Scott turned and watched in horror as she clenched her teeth and hissed loudly.  “Are you okay?  What’s wrong?” he yelled.
            The passenger’s back arched violently, and she turned to Scott, a hideous grin on her face.  “The accident happened right here.  At Ricker’s Pond.”  She yanked her sweater over her head.
            Scott screamed.  The figure sitting beside him was clearly a man, wearing a black jacket, a face mask, and a red scarf.  Blobs of blood dripped from the jacket.
            Transfixed by the horrible sight, Scott fumbled with his seatbelt.  “You can let me out now.  We’re here!” his bloodied passenger said.  She glared straight into his eyes, and Scott saw that the azure glint was gone.  They were completely black.
It was 2:32.  Desperately grabbing at the doorknob, Scott tried to open his door.  He saw the animal ahead a split second later. 
It looked like a deer on steroids.  Scott pounded the brake with all his might.  It would not depress.  Scott shouted, pounding it rapidly with his foot.  The gigantic beast stared questioningly at him, its antlers high above the truck.  
Scott’s mouth opened wide in a helpless bellow as the truck rammed the moose at seventy miles per hour, shattering, bending, and snapping everything.
Twenty minutes later, a vehicle pulled up.  An old man leapt out and jogged around the crushed truck, searching for survivors.  There was one man in the wreckage, clearly dead, next to the truck’s clock, which blinked 2:32 over and over again.
Shaking his head, the old man walked back to his car.  Sitting in his passenger seat, staring silently, was a male hitchhiker wearing a black jacket and a red scarf.